“RJ in California” and a bit of a poetry lesson to boot
by jdavidcharles
I think all poetry should speak for itself; however, sometimes we find uncanny poems or poems that take up a foreign world with them, whether that be historical (classic or epic poetry), pseudo-mythic (Blake), literally foreign (haiku, Baudelaire, etc), or simply embedded in a poetic tradition we are unfamiliar with. So, in the hopes that people we use this poem as a starting point to learn more (and in the process learn more about the poem) I thought I’d share a little of its historical roots and what I was thinking.
Famed Beat poet Allen Ginsberg wrote a fabulous little pseudo-ode to Walt Whitman entitled A Supermarket in California (read here or listen to him read it here). This poem is one of my favorites, contrasting Whitman’s pseudo-prophetic conceptions of America in Leaves of Grass with the America of the late 50s. Following this poem as a sort of poetic guideline, I decided to wright a similar ode to another one of my favorite poets (another Californian nonetheless) Robinson Jeffers, contrasting his depressing and isolationist depiction of 50s and 60s America with recent times. The poem, hopefully, takes an ironic (in the classical sense) approach to America, as did Jeffers–portraying ways in which the America of today is exactly what Jeffers predicted and yet not at all what he predicted. I suppose that’s the irony of prophecy, you first have to believe it prophecy before you can see it fulfilled. Anyhow, I was thinking of Jeffers’ later poems like The Continent’s End, the conclusion of my poem referring directly to his. Enough dilly-dally–hope you enjoy!
RJ in California
poor Jeffers, grown old and
dying in Carmel, late 1950’s,
a wife and daughter buried
among the first Tor stones,
a clean shaven, sharp jaw,
pale eyes that never say anything
nice about anyone, brow wrinkled
by the America of post-WWII
apocalyptic decadence:
John, if I could play the part
of Ginsberg and go with
you now down half dim
lit streets, past the bright
and silver hybrids and side-
walked sycamores to the corner
supermarket, walk with you
down aisles of produce,
vegan mayonnaise and
tofurky corn dogs, chatting
of Parmenides and avocado
and the oh so many undone
by death since your simpler
days of political genocide, villains
in black boots and mustaches;
would we waltz down aisles
of vine-ripened just-in-season
heirloom tomatoes, hand in
hand on such a late and lonely
night? would we drink from
recycled bottles of a worker
run factory past the scores of
clustered yellow cyclists and
middle-aged joggers toward
the tides at Carmel Bay? would
we look back on the bay as we
scale the steps at Hawk Tower,
seeing Charon polling no ferry
along Carmel State Beach, but
casually ticketing the parked cars
and putting out beach fires?
makes me want to drink alchoholic beverages
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